On déménage!

Bonjour, rares lecteurs.

Juste pour vous dire que je déménage vers un petit blog Wordpress: http://frequences.idmuse.com/blogs/annalia/

Il est intégré à ma communauté d'écriture annuelle, Fréquences et je m'y sens un peu mieux lotie. Ceux d'entres vous qui ont des aspirations d'écrivains, ajoutez vous à notre petit groupe. :)
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# Posté le dimanche 13 décembre 2009 21:07

Mind Messing Goes Both Way

Still writing folks, even though this place doesn't get much love. I've reached Chapter 8 of Dashing Swordsman, but then got stuck by another project. It wouldn't leave my mind. In fact, it was bad enough to hog itself a soundtrack!

And, as you well know, only one man could mess with my mind so much! ;P Oh yes, there's another Fezim Aulm text right behind. This one comes right after the last played part - meaning he just surrendered to Jessana and agreed with Celdur to fake his death.

As for Celdur, well, he isn't my character. I hope this doesn't overstep anything and that I did it right. :x (There is one thing wrong about it: Celdur has the same speech colour than Yultes. Weeeiiird.

Here goes!

***

Jessana stomped back up the hill, her brown mane flying behind her. She had taken the time to strap her armour back on properly and clutched her Heironeous symbol tightly. Part of her thick hair clung to her forehead, the rest fizzling around her shoulders. Her face was flushed from a mix of emotions: anger, embarrassment, confusion, hatred... So many feelings running through her head that even half a hour alone had not sufficed to put them in order. Truth was, she doubted years alone would help any. Thirty minutes had been enough to make her decision, however, and that was all duty would allow.

“He will be brought to trial,” she declared in a level, barely-controlled voice. “In Reverence, where charges for rape await him.”

The tall, blonde-haired paladin nodded sharply. Celdur's face was pale but resolute and Jessana was glad to note he hadn't taken off with her captive. She had not truly believed he would but since dealing with Fezim Aulm, she had trouble trusting anyone but herself. She sighed, noting that while the Enchanter had a few more red rashes than when she'd last see him, he could still talk.

“You didn't gag him?” she exclaimed, control leaving her voice instantly. “By the Archpaladin, he's a wizard! What were you thinking?”

She walked straight up to the Enchanter, who reflexively took a step back and glanced at the bloodied sword tied to her side. She ignored his reaction and grabbed his sleeve. Fezim's eyes went wide.

“Surely there is no need for this,” he mumbled, biting his lower lip for what was sure to come.

“There is every need,” she replied through clenched teeth, not looking up at him. Her two hands set firmly on the robes' soft tissue and she began pulling with all her strength. The fabric gave off a loud, resounding ripping sound and Fezim cringed as she tore his sleeve all the way up to his elbow.

“Bloodied and torn... This really isn't – hmmff!”

Fezim never got to the end of his thoughts, interrupted by Jessana's sudden stuffing of his robe's sleeve into his mouth. Her movements were quick and forceful and as the gag touched his mouth, he was glad Celdur had used his magic to clean him. Blood and vomit was not something he wanted to spend days tasting.

“That is much better,” Jessana commented. She stepped back and let out a heavy sigh. Her eyes searched for the Enchanter's pack. “We leave in but a few minutes. Celdur... I thank you for your guidance in this matter. May both Pelor and Heironeous guide your steps.”

“Wait, I'm not going anywhere,” Celdur said. “I was not pursuing any particular endeavour. I will accompany you.”

“You want to come?” she asked, visibly surprised. She had always been alone in pursuing Fezim and it had not crossed her mind for even a moment another paladin would want part of this.

“Of course. I go where my help is needed, Jessana,” he answered softly.

“I don't need your help!” she retorted angrily, striding to Fezim's pack and looking away to hide her flush. Celdur sighed.

“You are fatigued physically and emotionally. Chasing him must have been long and hard, but you still must bring him to Reverence. You cannot watch him all-day long. You will need to sleep, at the very least,” Celdur replied without backing down for a single second. “There is no need to do this alone.”

“I'm not alone...” she replied softly, her fingers touching her bloodied holy symbol. “But you are right. Two cannot be too many to watch him. I would be... honoured to have your help.”

Celdur smiled but Jessana was not looking at him. She bent over, picked the magical sack and silently wished for its content to spill out. Everything crashed on the ground, with multiple wine bottles rolling down the rocky slopes and breaking upon a rock. These weren't what Jessana was looking for, although she did throw them a disdainful glance. Instead she reached for a dark purple tome engraved with an arcane symbol. Fezim had stared at his feet as his best wine bottles were destroyed, but he snapped his head up as he noticed she carried his spellbook.

Jessana glanced at him and threw the book further off, away from the rest of his equipment. She then picked one of the few intact bottles and smashed its top on a nearby rock. Fezim bit his lower lip but, mustering every bit of control he still had, he remained still and silent. Jessana advanced on the purple tome with the smashed bottle and unceremoniously dumped the wine on the spellbook. Fezim frowned, unsure of what she was trying to achieve – he had long ago learned to remove wine smears from the precious pages.

The paladin reached out in one of her pockets as the enchanter waited, barely breathing. Celdur had stepped closer to him and although he would never openly admit it, the tall man's presence felt somewhat reassuring. He'd convinced Celdur that his plan was the best course of action to adopt – for once, he had an ally in his scheme. An almost sadistic smile reached Jessana's face and she brought a tiny tinder twig out of pocket. Fezim heart stopped beating: he could clean pages, but he would never recuperate burnt ones. Jessana scratched the tinder twig and lit it up, flicking it at the spellbook.

“No!” Fezim called through the gag and even with the sound muffled, all understood the exclamation perfectly. He tried to dive forward but Celdur put a firm hand on his shoulder, keeping here where he'd stood. The pressure was just enough to restrain him without being forceful and Fezim understood he was better not leaping into the fire. He watched silently as the flames engulfed his spellbook but soon couldn't bear it. In a few seconds, Jessana had annihilated years of work.

“Let's go,” she said, her tone calm and level. No overall satisfaction or pleasure came through her voice and if she did feel excited about what she had just done, she kept a tight rein on her emotions. Slinging her pack over her shoulders, she motioned for Celdur to follow her down the mountainous trail.

***

I mentioned a soundtrack, didn't I? Well, the tune that played on loop while I wrote this is A Criminal Mind, from Gowan (and now Styx too). Anyway, I figured I could include it under!

# Posté le vendredi 24 juillet 2009 15:46

DSitM - Excerpt

Hey guys, been a while!

I've been working on a novel-length project, which is why nothing comes up here these days. But still, I felt like you might enjoy an excerpt that is, in my opinion, very characteristic of Everyn and Co. Here goes! :)

***

The young druid nodded and walked to the lake's shore while her companions grabbed their belongings. She stepped into the dark waters and let her hand trail on the surface for a moment, watching carefully as the fog clung to it. After a moment, she sighed and began a new song. Everyn and Tark moved closer as the fog thickened around the group.

As Pyrine cast her spell, the water under her hands seemed to shiver. Everyn watched in wonder sd the water level slowly lowered. A path was forming in front of the druid and ran down all the way to the bottom, where an old and algae-covered building stood. The fog there was quickly growing dense and, to the three companions' horror, soon took the vague form of a gigantic humanoid whose torso jutted out of the ground. Pyrine interrupted the spell and took a step back.

“That's not natural...” she muttered.

“What did you do with that fog?” Everyn asked, alarmed. Two long tendrils had formed through the mist and it did not bode well.

“Nothing! This isn't natural!”

“Seriously?” Everyn replied as he drew out his rapier.

“Of course I am serious,” Pyrine stated, looking at the swordsman weirdly.

“That was sarcasm, Pyrine!” he exclaimed with a sigh. She was visibly still confused but there was no time to explain. Two red eyes shone brightly through the mist.

“You always talk so much?” Tark asked as he took out his axe. He gave it a dubious glance but stepped forward anyway.

“It happens,” Everyn replied with a smirk as he moved alongside the lizardfolk.

“But this is battle!” Tark exclaimed, as the first tendril snapped forward.

It wrapped itself around Everyn so fast he didn't have the time to jump away. Nothing happened at first and he was about to laugh it off when the tip the appendage took a pinkish colour. Everyn felt his body weaken and his heart sink.

Tark let out a battle cry and attacked the tendril. The first swipe went right through but for some reason his axe bit hard on the second chop. The fog-monster retracted its tendril and let go off Everyn. The swordsman's arm where it had been grabbed was bright red but the surrounding skin was ghostly white.

“Alright, time to put an end to your mist-chief!” Everyn called out as he drove his rapier through the mist. The weapon shone slightly as its base enchantment worked and the monster let out a shrill, ear-piercing screech. A drop of red liquid fell to the ground and the tendril, which had turned pink upon touching Everyn, returned to a white colour.

***
Yeah, end of excerpt here. You'll have to read the whole thing to go on. :P
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# Posté le jeudi 16 juillet 2009 01:28

Attention Seeker

Woot, hey, new text! That took quite a while, but I'm suffering from Writer's Block at the moment (or well, 'desire to do anything' block would be more accurate). Anwyay, this doesn't have anything to do with ToI, but I couldn't resist once I had the idea. Not quite satisfied with how it came out but meh... you've gotta just go on sometimes.

Here comes!

***

The baby wailed. He put every inch of his tiny lungs into his screams, stopping only to catch his breath. He cried on and on, his shrill voice echoing through the rich manor's corridors and halls. The sound reached out to every living being in the house. Cats hid under sofas and bookshelves while fish swam towards the bottom of their aquarium. The exotic birds flew around their cage and answered the scream with their own screeches. The servants moved about with hands on their ears, cursing after the newly born baby. He had been on this earth for only two days now and they already found him unbearable.

The nurse hired to keep watch over him tried every trick she had. She spent her entire days with the baby, cuddling and cooing him. Sometimes he stopped crying for a minute or two and everyone – servants and noble alike – would heave out of relief. It never lasted. The moment she put him back down in his cradle, he wailed again and there was nothing she could have done to make him stop again.

The good nurse was a dedicated person, however, and she spent days and night attempting to ease the newly born baby's crying. She fed him often – more than would normally be advised, but at least he could not yell when he drank – and wrapped him in a warm and soft blanket. His clothes were always completely clean and indeed the baby seemed to like the fresh scent of recently-washed fabric. He would sniff for a few seconds before crying once more, reaching out for the nurse.

Every second of her time was devoted to the baby. When no new ideas would come to her, she would sit in a rocking chair next to the cradle and wait. She rocked herself back and forth endlessly. Her thick body would move forward and backward at the same rhythm than the baby's cries. He screamed and rocked forward. He took a deep breath and she went back. Soon, she grunted with his cries. His wailings regulated her life entirely. His wailings were her life.

Yet she did not understand why he would not stop. Normal babies would sleep after their meals, not cry until their throats grew parched. Normal babies would reach for her fingers and giggle when she brought her hand close, not roll away and yell harder. Normal babies were adorable and people gathered around to watch him, not little pests that made everyone flee. This wasn't a normal baby, though, and the nurse knew it. It had been crying for one hundred ninety two hours without stop. The wailing drove her crazy. It had to stop. She would make it stop.

With a grim determination, the nurse picked the tiny bundle of clothes in which the baby was. It stopped crying to stare at her but she ignored him and headed straight for the balcony. As soon as they'd stepped outside, the minuscule human let his lungs loose once more. The nurse grunted angrily and moved to the railing. She stretched her arms in front of her, holding the baby by the armpits. His blankets fell off, slowly twirling down the two stories.

As it touched the ground, the baby shut up. He looked at the nurse, his wide blue eyes filled to the rim with tears. His lips stopped trembling and he giggled happily, tiny fingers grasping for her larger hands. The nurse stared at him as he cooed and smiled. It was one of the most beautiful babies she had seen in her entire life. She brought it back, wondering how – even for a single second – she could have thought of dropping it over the railing.

Then the baby began crying. It had to stop. She would make it stop. She could make it stop. The nurse put the baby down and brought her hands to her ears, but it was not enough to block off the sound. It had to stop. She would make it stop. She could make it stop. With a final grunt, the nurse jumped over the railing.

The crying stopped as she hit the ground.


Although he was alone on the balcony without a blanket to protect me, the newborn had indeed stopped wailing. He could hear alarmed cries from below. He could hear people running around, some screaming. He did not understand the commotion. He did not know what had caused the mansion's attention to divert away from him. He didn't like it. Taking in a deep breath, the baby cried out again.

Someone indeed came. Delicate hands picked him back up and brought him into a cream-white robe. It was soft velvet and the tiny baby grabbed it and clung to the breasts behind, his mouth close into a smile of satisfaction. Long blonde hair cascaded around him. This was a warm and comfortable place to be.

“No need to cry, Fezim,” a voice said, rather annoyed. “You caused quite a mess, darling, but you will be fine. We will find you a new nurse.”

The baby giggled and looked up at the woman's face. She had a long and delicate nose, as well as thin lips and a sickly pale skin. She looked down on him with only a weak, disinterested smile and put him down in the cradle. He sniffed loudly and stared up at her, eyes wide.

“Well, aren't those pretty blue eyes?” she said, her smile widening slightly. “I bet they'll turn grey like your father's.”

The woman then turned around and walked away. When her form left his sight, Fezim Aulm took a deep breath in and cried out. The baby wailed – again.

# Posté le lundi 15 juin 2009 16:14

United, Part 9

Look, the other part has already arrived! Amazing, eh? I don't know how much you guys will be interested in this one, but I had lots of fun with it .There are side characters in ToI that don't often get the lights, but which I appreciate quite a bit. Vellien is one of them, and this short part involves him in teenager years.

While I work on falling back into my previous rhythm with this, I also have other ongoing projects. I've been re-editing many of the short stories I put up here in the hopes of assembling them all in a single document. Depending on the length of it, I'll most likely be ordering myself a copy of it too.

Other than that, July will also be dedicated to another text than the First Generation. I've finally decided to finish the Masset Brothers' story, so you'll still be getting feedback from me.

***

As the assembled sun elves restarted their earlier conversations or discussed the wedding ceremony, Tatiel grabbed Lehran's wrist and dragged him through the crowd. She knew Vellien was trying to be discreet now that his role was over, but she hunted down her target as surely as a magic missile reaches its target. When she finally spotted him, drinking his non-alcoholised apple cider alone, she called out:

“Hey, Vellien! What're you doing alone?”

The young elf looked up and smiled somewhat shyly. He put down his glass and waited for Tatiel and Lehran to come closer.

“There's no point in having a conversation if you have nothing interesting to say,” he replied.

“What, and you think you're not interesting?” Tatiel asked with a knowing smirk. In the past five years, Vellien had had a growing tendency to mope about himself and what he wanted to be. She knew it came with the age, but she made sure to cheer up her distant relative whenever she could.

“I – well...”

“Oh, come on!” Lehran exclaimed. “You looked great at the ceremony. I bet all the religious girls fall head over heels for you.”

“Not really, no,” Vellien replied with raised eyebrows.

“Bah, they don't know what they're missing!”

“Sir, you don't even know me,” the younger elf pointed out, smiling slightly.

“Sure I do! Tatiel keeps talking about you all the time. I think if you had a few more years, she'd be flirting with you instead of me!”

“And there he goes, spreading rumours on my account! Fine then, I'll leave you boys and go seek out my fun elsewhere,” Tatiel said in a false exasperation. Her voice then fell in a whisper and she added: “I heard our cousin invited a non-noble lady over, and I want to check her out before they leave.”

“You may want to hurry, then. I heard Lord Gallinos say they would not stay long after the ceremony,” Vellien said. “He preferred not to bring attention to his companion too much, I think. She's really charming, though.”

“Then I want to see her at some point, that's sure!” Lehran declared with a chuckle.

“Hey, I'm the one you just married!” Tatiel protested. “Leave the other women for your new family members, okay?”

“Of course, my sweet. I already have more than my share with you,” Lehran replied with a grin. “You can leave and rest assured; I will do nothing more than share some manly tips with Vellien here.”

“Excellent!” Tatiel said before leaning forward and kissing Lehran. “I'll see you later.”

The two men nodded as Tatiel whirled around, causing her partly-braided hair to fly around her head. Lehran smiled dreamily, wondering in a daze how he had managed to marry such a beautiful woman. Vellien let out a heavy sigh and looked away. Even enthranced by Tatiel's movements, the newly-wedded elf did not miss the sound.

“What's up, Vellien?” he asked with a frown.

“Oh, hum, nothing...” the younger elf replied, flushing badly. “I was just thinking... you really got lucky. I don't think I'll ever get someone like Tatiel.”

“My friend, you have everything you need to get the girl you want,” Lehran said confidently. “Women are suckers for singer and you've got a great voice.”

“You think?” Vellien asked with wide eyes, looking down.

“Of course I do, mate!” the sun elf replied more seriously.

“I never saw it that way... I only ever sing religious things.”

Lehran laughed softly and shook his head. He'd never quite understood the devoted-type but he quite liked Lord Vellien already. It surprised him how many golden heads there were around him and he wondered exactly what the blood ties were between all these sun elves. He didn't know much of them and realised that even after spending an entire year in the Dathirii tower, he hadn't met that many nobles.

“So, huh... Vellien? Do you know all these people?” Lehran asked, scanning the crowd.

“Yeah, of course I do,” the younger elf answered immediately.

“Mmkay...” Lehran let out with a sigh. He spotted a woman about Lord Dathirii's age, with long, silky hair and intense blue eyes. Dressed in a long, pale violet robe, she was talking with the Head of the House and he listened intently. “Who's that?”

“That's Lady Camilla, Lehran – Lord Dathirii's sister,” Vellien stated with a surprised look at him. “She's also Gallinos' and Nellis' mother.”

“Ah, right... I knew that!”

“You did not,” the young cleric said with a smirk. “Anyone else you want to know?”

“Yeah... See that elf over the buffet table – the one who looks a bit older than me, has short hair and wears the classy ceremonial armour and isn't holding a glass?”

“That's Lord Kellian. He's a cousin of mine and will probably lead the Dathirii Special Guard in a few decades. I saw him fight; he's already quite good.”

“Okay. Why is he staring at my brother and that other sun elf like that? He looks like he wants to walk over and break their discussion!”

Vellien tilted his head to the side and looked Yultes' way. Lehran's brother was talking with a slender Dathirii with long and lustrous hair that had been visibly very well taken care of. Even though everyone was well-dressed today, he had particularly rich-looking robes and wore quite a few rings. The young priest frowned and sighed.

“Your brother is talking to Lord Hellion – Kellian's brother. I know neither of them all that well, but they both don't get along very well. That's probably why the staring.”

“Aah, okay... now let's see who else...” Lehran said, once more searching through the crowd for interesting-looking sun elves. Vellien seemed to enjoy this game and if the young cleric was willing to fill him in on Tatiel's numerous family members, he wouldn't refuse such an occasion. That way, the next time they'd meet someone, he'd know who he was talking to. This would be a very prolific day.

# Posté le lundi 08 juin 2009 15:23